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Altered Hearts Pt 1 Ch 2 by ~Robby92:iconRobby92:



                                                      The Destin Room
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     "Welcome Keiran to the Destin Room", said Neome as i started to look around. It was merely a round room with no furniture all painted wait. The walls of marble and the floors of white tile, above was a painting of a few clouds on a white sky. Around the wall were five dents which seemed where Paintings could hang.
     "What is this place?" I asked her blinded by it's beauty and simplicity.
     "This is the room where all Galaxies are connected, These are the doors to all worlds. Inside each portal leads to another where it divides to different smaller worlds. They are organized by whether or not the worlds are connected. Some worlds are exact replicas of the other but do not be mistaken there is no original and no copy. Both of these kinds of worlds are the same but in different places."
     "I don't understand," I looked at her, I finally began to realize what she looked like. She had silver hair tied up into a bun at the back of her head. She wore a Silver robe that reached the floor and she was the most beautiful thing i had ever seen. I began to drop to my knees until she grabbed me.
     "Do not look at me for too long, for I am an angel and because of this you will feel the urge to see me as something higher. I am not for I am a fallen angel, I no longer carry wings and so instead i have become the guardian of the worlds you see before me. But enough of me, we must come to the task in hand." At that moment a light flashed and her robe turned into a ball of light as she disappeared. I franticaly looked around for her to see where she had gone but she was nowhere to be found.
     "Neome?" i started to panic, "Neome?!" I approached one of the dents and began to look at it in a trance. I drew more near it unwillingly like i was under some unexplicable trance. "Here the boy named Sora fights alongside Donald and Goofy to save the world of the Heartless and the Nobodies." came Neome's voice in a whisper, as if she had spoken to me within my head. "These are creatures created from souls and hearts lost to the darkness in them. They only wish the same on those around them." Sora's Keyblade then came out and hang itself in the air suspending. I stared at it with great respect. I felt it's poor pouring out of it "Here Keir are the other hero's that will fight with you only when the time comes, but for now you must return home. For there no creatures will attack you for it is the place where all things will end. For now it is safe."
     "Then why am i here?" I asked, "Shouldn't i only be worried of my galaxy."
     "NO! WHAT DO YOU THINK WOULD'VE HAPPENED IF SORA HAD ONLY CARED ABOUT his WORLDS!!! ALL HOPE WOULD'VE BEEN LOST! Now... you're galaxy is safe and now we are calling you to safe another galaxy." She calmed down and appeared before me, "Do not worry Keir I will not send you alone, I will be with you and so will someone else for now go back home." I looked at another dent and i saw my own body sleeping, I slowly aproached and as everything went black and i fell into that state of innocence and liberty known as Sleep.
©2008-2009 ~Robby92
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Author's Comments

Ok so here it is... getting kind of serious and it's only chapter one of part one which in case you're wondering is the Prologue so not really long until Part 2

Also really cool first seeing of Keyblade and The Sword of Faith

CREDITS:
Sora, keyblade, heartless, nobody (c) Square Enix
Keir, Kaethe, Neome (c) Me


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E-READER:
IN the story there are 5 dents... i only will name four so what should be the 5th dent a portal too? If no one answers i'll make somthing rlly cool up and leave it a suprise.

RECCOMENDED MATERIALS:
Kingdom Hearts (PS2 GAME)
Kingdom Hearts II (PS2 GAME)
Faithful Hearts [link] (BOOK)
Time-Trilogy [link] (BOOK by same author of Altered Hearts)

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=) Cool! I like it so far!

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